My Immortal... but with ponies: Chapter 1

So I feel as if I should post it on here, because I would have nowhere else to put it.
I'm not looking for reviews or anything, as My Immortal is not my work (thank God).

But anyway, here's what My Immortal would look like if it had ponies in it. Well, the first chapter at least. It actually takes... quite a bit of time to edit, not going to lie.
The logo may be pretty shit, but you know what? I don't care right now. Until I get my ass together and actually draw something related to My Immortal and ponies, the logo will stay.
I'm new to deviant art, so I don't know how copyright stuff works. Really, the only things I've taken are Harry Potter (I guess...?), Tara Gilesbie's work and ponies. So, if anyone wants to tell me about copyright details, just send me a message or something.

The character list will be up eventually, but there aren't many characters at the present time, so I'll leave it be.

So, here ya go.

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic © Hasbro, Lauren Faust, Studio B.